2016普陀区初三英语一模卷普陀区第一学期初三期末考英语试卷答案解析(9)

C 篇

81. detail 这位来自澳大利亚的女士可以清楚的记得她生活中的所有细节。

82. forget 这意味着她可以记得每一件小事，而这些小事一般人没有几天就忘记了。

83. earliest 根据上文回忆童年回忆可得答案。

84. exactly 由上文可知，她年纪还小，无法完全清楚地记得所有的日期。

85. pleasant 由上下文可知，她记忆里的事情是非常令人愉悦的。

86. return 当我回想起那时候的事情时，当时的那种感觉也就回来了。

87. radio 我晚上不得不听着收音机睡觉。

D 篇

88.根据第一段第三句

A：Yes, he did.

89.根据第二段第二句

A：They are in the garden.

90.根据第四段第二句

A：Glenn’s father.

91.根据第五段第一句

A：He filled a bucket with water from the bathroom and threw water over his mother and her bed.

92.根据第六段第一句

A：Because the house is smoke-filled and the fire had almost covered the ground floor.

93.推理题

A：The string will lead you to my mother.

Ⅶ.Writing.

Suppose your school is organizing a study trip to Britain. What king of host family would you like to live with? And why? Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the situation given (假如你们学校正在组织一次去英国的游学活动，你想选择怎样的住家？为什么？请根据所给情景写一篇不少于60字的短文。)

题目解析

STEP ONE: 审题

1.审体裁

夹叙夹议。既要表明自己想要的住家的特点，又要说明原因。

2.审人称和时态

写本人的喜好，故应为第一人称

时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主

3.审要点

你想要什么样的住家？

你为什么想要这样的住家？

对游学生活有何期待？

STEP TWO: 写作模板

1.开头

引出话题，表明要去英国游学，希望可以住到怎样的住家。

2.中间

1.期待的住家是什么样子的

2.为什么会有这样的要求和期待

3.这样的住家可以给你带来什么

3.结尾

呼应开头，重申对游学以及对住家的期待

STEP THREE: 可用素材

1.词汇

atmosphere, scenery, view, location, pollution 等

2.词组、句式

look forward to, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned 等

3.名人名言

A wish or desire accompanied by confident expectation of its fulfillment 等

4.连接词

firstly, secondly, in addition, to conclude, what’s more 等

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范文点评

A host family that I want

It is really a surprise when I know that I could take a study trip to Britain and live in a host family during these days. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer a host family that have a beautiful scenery and students of my age.

Firstly, I believe a wonderful scenery is of great importance for my study there, both physically and mentally.

I could breathe the fresh air and enjoy the comfortable breeze with my friends. Secondly, I am really looking forward to making friends with British students who are of similar age and had many interesting things to talk about.

To conclude, I hope I could not only learn a lot of knowledge but also make many friends during this study trip.

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：It 做形式主语，避免了句子头重脚轻的问题。宾语从句的套用使句子逻辑清晰，句式较高级。

亮点二：全文巧用“firstly, secondly, to conclude” 等连接词，把对住家的两大期待即环境优美和有同龄学生的要求清晰罗列出来，文章结构明朗，使阅卷老师一目了然。

亮点三：be of great importance 善用名词结构，避免了使用较频繁的be important。

亮点四：both physically and mentally，巧用副词，使句子简约高端。

亮点五：全文多次出现宾语从句、定语从句和状语从句等，使文章层次分明且增加了文采分。