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2017南京高三一模英语作文 对罗一笑事件的看法

时间:2017-01-12 09:15  作者:admin  来源:本站整理

On Nov. 25, 2016, Luo Er in the city of Shenzhen published an article about his 5-year-old daughter’s leukemia(白血病)to raise money for her treatment via WeChat, China’ most popular messaging app. According to the WeChat account, Luo raised more than 2 million yuan. 

However, he was flooded with considerable criticism. On one hand, he was revealed as the owner of three apartments. On the other hand, the Shenzhen hospital treating Luo’s daughter confirmed that the five-year-old leukemia patient was receiving the highest level of medical care, but said the cost of the treatment totaled 200,000 yuan, with more than 82% of those expenses covered by government health insurance. That meant Luo raised 75 times his spending on his daughter’s treatment via WeChat. On Nov. 30, Shenzhen’s civil affairs authority said it had launched an investigation into the case. 

Some Internet users said they thought the campaign may be a marketing exercise or even a downright fraud. “If it were me, I would never use this incident to push my kid in front of the public,” one Internet user wrote on China’s Weibo site. Another said, “I feel that we are cheated and I’ll save my kindness for others who truly need it and don’t write articles for marketing.”


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One possible version:

A father, who posted his daughter’s illness via WeChat to raise money for her treatment, was criticized by the public because he had the ability to cover the medical expenses. 

I’m in complete disagreement with the behavior of the father. It’s apparent that raising money on the Internet is an effective way to help those in need, which can not only assist them in getting through the hardships but also be helpful in creating a harmonious society. However, this father can afford the medical expenses but turned to others for help, which betrayed the public’s trust and made them feel cheated.

As far as I’m concerned, only when one is in desperate need can they seek for help from others. Meanwhile, the government and relevant authorities should make efforts to enhance the supervision of the identity of those seeking help and get to the truth of their problems. 

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