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高三短文改错Today I was in the shopping center with my

时间:2018-01-12 11:15  作者:David  来源:本站整理

 Today I was in the shopping center with my neighbor, who was there to collect several item for a friend. One of the friend’s parents were struck by a serious disease. While staying there, I became aware a young mom with her daughter. She was paying the attention to her as they shopped. I stopped her to offer my appreciation to him for the fact which she was so devoted to her little girl. I went on to say that I feel sad to see moms texting or talking on their cell phones and completely ignore their children. I praised her and told the little girl that she had the good mom in the whole world. The mom smiled, obvious feeling happy at my words.


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Today I was in the shopping center with my neighbor, who was there to collect several item for a friend. One of
                                                                          items
the friend’s parents were struck by a serious disease. While staying there, I became aware ∧ a young mom with her
                was                                                     of
daughter. She was paying the attention to her as they shopped. I stopped her to offer my appreciation to him for the
                     删除the                                                       her
fact which she was so devoted to her little girl. I went on to say that I feel sad to see moms texting or talking on their
    that                                                 felt
cell phones and completely ignore their children. I praised her and told the little girl that she had the good mom in
                      ignoring                                                    best
the whole world. The mom smiled, obvious feeling happy at my words.
                            obviously

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