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高一短文改错Square dancing has been more and more popular

时间:2018-10-10 18:50  作者:David  来源:本站整理

Square dancing has been more and more popular with the elderly as their living conditions improve. Most people thought it can help people take regularly exercise and improve their fitness. Besides, it provides people more chances to take activities outdoor. However, some people argue that the music is very noisy, that disturbs the surrounding citizens’ normal life. Also, be exposed to (暴露于) such loud noise may do a harm to their health in the long run.
In my opinion, square dancing is a good form of exercise, so dancers should take our neighbors’ need into consideration. If they choose a right time and turn down the music, it will cause less troubles for others.


答案

Square dancing has been more and more popular with the elderly as their living conditions

Improve. Most people thought it can help people take regularly exercise and improve their fitness.
think                     regular
Besides, it provides people ∧ more chances to take activities outdoor. However, some people
with                        outdoors
argue that the music is very noisy, that disturbs the surrounding citizens’ normal life. Also,
which                                       
 be exposed to such loud noise may do  a  harm to their health in the long run.
being    去掉 a
In my opinion, square dancing is a good form of exercise, so dancers should take our
but                their
neighbors’ need into consideration. If they choose a right time and turn down the music, it will

cause less troubles for others.
         trouble

 

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