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2019大连一模短文改错From you letter I know it is hard for

时间:2019-04-15 19:32  作者:Edmond  来源:www.2abc8.com

 Dear Steven ,
From you letter , I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following suggestions may be for some help to you.
To begin with , walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talks , you will happy find that they are likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually , you will enjoy each other company. Besides , you,d better to give them a hand when they are inn trouble. It is advisable to participate in different kind of activities , which you can communicate with different people.
All in all , follow my advice above , and you would find that it isn't big deal to make some friends.
Yours ,
Jack  


答案

Dear Steven.

From your letter, I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following suggestions may be for

of

some help to you.

To begin with,walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talks, you will happy
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find that they are likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually, you will enjoy each other

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company. Besides, you’d better to give them a hand when they are in trouble. It is advisable to
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participate in different kind of activities. which you can communicate with different people.

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All in all, follow my advice above, and you would find that it isn't big deal to make some

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friends.

Yours.
Jack

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