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高三短文改错When I was in the 6th grade my parents bought

时间:2019-04-22 13:18  作者:Edmond  来源:www.2abc8.com

When I was in the 6th grade, my parents bought me a cell phone. I was really exciting to receive the phone. The next weekend, my family went on camping in the East Lake Park. We enjoy boating on the lake. I used our new phone to play some of my favorite song. I thought it would be brilliant idea to put my phone in a plastic bag to protecting it from water. After getting back, I took the phone in, only to find the bag full of water. I didn’t know what to save my phone and I tried laying it out to dry. Unfortunately, it started to rain. What an awfully experience!


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When I was in the 6th grade, my parents bought me a cell phone. I was really exciting to

excited

receive the phone. The next weekend, my family went on camping in the East Lake Park We

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enjoy boating on the lake. I used our new phone to play some of my favorite song. I thought enjoyed my songs

would be ^ brilliant idea lo put my phone in a plastic bag to protecting it from water After

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getting back. I took the phone In, only to find the bag full of water. I didn't know what to 

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save my phone so I tried laying it out to dry. Unfortunately, it started to rain. What an awfully experience!

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