高二短文改错Last weekend we went mountain climbing
时间:2019-08-23 20:27 作者:Edmond 来源:www.2abc8.com
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road,all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.
After short rest,we started going down. It rained more harder. We were wet all over,and we still felt happy.
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Last weekend we went mountain - climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off
could
early and went along an extreme narrow road ,all in high spirit. On either side of the road was
extremely spirits were
green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to
mixed 去掉to
the top of the mountain,there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes,
where(或前面加and)
After short rest, we started going down. It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we
After后加a much(或去掉 more) but
still felt happy.
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