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高三短文改错Recently I’ve done a survey in our class on my

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Recently I’ve done a survey in our class on my classmates think of ads. The majority of my classmate take a positive attitude to ads in that ads do bring us convenient. Other students argue that being largely expo-sing to ads may lead to the sameness ranging from clothes, shelters to transportation.

From my point of the view, I prefer the former opinion to the latter for the following reasons. The first rea-son is rooted in the fact that there was various ads so that people have various choices. Secondly,with ads, that would be difficult to get across a product's basic message. However, ads, instead of making people seem to be the same. contributes greatly to people’s better life.

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to ads may lead to the sameness ranging from clothes, shelters to transportation.

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reason is rooted in the fact that there was various ads so that people have various choices. Secondly, with ads, that 

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would be difficult to get across a product’s basic message. However, ads, instead of making people seem to be the 

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same, contributes greatly to people’s better life.

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