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九年级英语作文 真实的自我 介绍自己的英语作文

时间:2018-01-24 19:03  作者:David  来源:本站整理

某英文网站正在开展以“真实的自我”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍一下自己,主要内容包括:你的优点,你是怎样发展自己的优势的,以及你将来的梦想。

提示词语:helpful, good at, housework, study
提示问题:
 What are your strong points?
 How do you improve yourself?
 What is your dream for the future?

Hello, everyone!
   I’m Li Hua and I’m very happy to introduce myself.

参考范文:


Hello, everyone!
   I’m Li Hua and I’m very happy to introduce myself. I’m a kind and helpful student and I’m very good at English.
   At home I often help my parents with the housework. Doing housework is good for my future life. At school I always study English hard, because I want to make much progress. And I try my best to help my classmates who are weak in it.
   As for my dream, I want to be an English teacher. I’ll not only take good care of my students but also help them learn English well. I hope to make each of my students grow as a person.

评  分  标  准
第一档:(9~10分)
完全符合题目要求,观点正确, 要点齐全。句式多样,词汇丰富。语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,具有逻辑性。 
第二档:(6~8分)
基本符合题目要求,观点正确, 要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯,表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。
第三档:(3~5分)
部分内容符合题目要求,要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言不通顺,表达不够清楚,影响整体理解。
第四档:(0~2分)
与题目有关内容不多,只是简单拼凑词语,所写内容难以理解。

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