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中考模拟英语作文 生活中你遇见美的一次经历

时间:2018-04-25 12:38  作者:David  来源:www.2abc8.com

 现在,某英文报纸正在开展以“遇见美”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈一谈生活中你遇见美的一次经历,主要内容包括你什么时候在哪里遇见了美,经历了什么事情以及你为什么觉得它美。
提示词语:visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory
提示冋题:1. When and where did it happen?
2. What did you experience?
3. Why was it beautiful?
One possible version:
Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.
The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.
From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.
书面表达评分标准
第一档:(10 ~9分)
完全符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。句式多样,词汇丰富。语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,具有逻辑性。
第二档:(8~6分)
基本符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯,表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。
第三档:(5~3分)
部分内容符合题目要求,要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言不通顺,表达不够清楚,影响整体理解。
第四档:(2~0分)
与题目有关内容不多,只是简单拼凑提示词语,所写内容难以理解。

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