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孝感市2018年中考英语作文 端午节观看龙舟比赛英文日记

时间:2018-07-07 19:16  作者:David  来源:本站整理

本周一是端午节,你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣,你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。
写作要点:
1.现场情况。人多拥挤,16支龙舟队竞争激烈,人们欢呼,队员们闭队合作,最终“勇气队”获胜。
2.赛后活动:我给Tony介绍端午节,下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动,如……
3.感想:Tony……,我……
写作要求:
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺,条理清晰;
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可);
3.100词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.    

参考范文
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.
书面表达题评分档次:
①第五档(13-15分)
很好地完成了规定的写作任务,包含所有内容要点,结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚,连贯,使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇,语法和词汇错误极少,格式正确,书写规范。
②第四档(10-12分)
较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本上包含所有内容要点,结构较为完整,语句完整,意思清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较少,格式基本正确,书写较为规范。
③第三档(7-9分)
基本上完成了规定的写作任务,包含主要内容要点,结构欠完整,少数语句不通顺,意思基本清楚,语法结构和词汇错误较多,格式基本正确,书写基本规范。
④第二档(4-6分)
未能按要求完成规定的写作任务,只包含少数内容要点,结构不完整,多数语句欠完整,意思不够清楚,语法结构和词汇错误较多,影响理解,格式不够正确,书写欠规范。
⑤第一档(0-3分)
未能按要求完成规定的写作任务,只写出个别要点,结构不完整,多数语句不完整或意思不明,语法结构和词汇错误很多,书写不规范。

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