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九年级英语作文 初中三年来在学习和生活方面的收获 困惑和感受

时间:2018-08-09 17:01  作者:David  来源:本站整理

 假定你是李华,你的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请根据信中的内容及你的实际情况回复邮件。
To: lihua@china.com
From: davidsmith@britain.com
Subject: School life
Dear Li Hua,
Glad to hear you're graduating from junior high school. I'm interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things?
●What do you like best about your school life?
●What's the biggest problem as a junior student?
●Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
David
注意:⒈词数80左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
⒉回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
⒊文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email.
Best wishes,
Li Hua   
【答案】Dear David,
    Thank you so much for your email. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.
    I like the Football Club best because I've made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, it's an excellent chance to learn team spirit. However, I've also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. In short. I enjoy my school life because it's colourful and meaningful.
    How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua 
【考点】应用文写作  
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作,本文要求结合题目按照提示写一篇中学学校生活的文章。并要介绍中学三年的学习生活,自己最喜欢的是什么,最大的问题是什么,是否喜欢中学学校生活,并给出理由。按要求可知这篇文章要用一般现在时,并注意上下文的逻辑关系。
【点评】这篇短文详细地阐述了自己的中学学习生活,包含了题目要求的所有信息,其中使用了一些固定句式和短语,表语从句,主语从句等为文章增色不少。如 Moreove ,However, In short这些连接词的运用使文章通顺流畅,又如it's an excellent chance to learn team spirit,用it做形式主语,真正主语是后面的动词不定式,The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies。特别是表语从句的使用,可圈可点。在平时的学习中药牢记一些固定句式和短语,在写作中就能运用,使文章更有逻辑性,也更由条理。

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