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襄阳市2018年中考英语作文范文The Mistake Made Me Grow Up

时间:2018-09-09 19:10  作者:David  来源:本站整理

 人非圣贤,孰能无过?作为一名学生,在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事?在认识到自己所犯错误或明白所做的傻事后,你又是如何改止的呢?请根据写作要点提示,以“ The Mistake Made Me Grow Up”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
1.写作要点提示
1)简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事;
2)谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或在自己的努力下改正的;
3)你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。
2.注意事项:
1)字数:90词左右;
2)短文内容应包含提示的要点,可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;
3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4)已给标题不计入总字数,也不得抄入答题卡。
The Mistake Made Me grow Up
                                                                                         
                                                                                  
【分析】【高分句型一】
 If we learn from our mistakes,we will have learnt another secret to success.如果我们从错误中吸取教训,我们将会学到成功的另一个秘诀.
if引导条件状语从句用一般现在时表将来,主句用will+动词原形
【高分句型二】
When I was depressed,it was my math  who gave me a hand and told me that mistakes could also teach us a lesson.当我沮丧的时候,是我的数学老师帮助了我,告诉我错误也可以给我们一个教训.
when引导时间状语从句;that引导定语从句,修饰teacher
【解答】The Mistake Made Me grow Up
Everyone may make mistakes. Mistakes make us grow.  If we learn from our mistakes,we will have learnt another secret to success. 【高分句型一】 Although mistakes are annoying,as long as we face it bravely,we will succeed sooner or later.(引起下文)
      There was once a time when I made a mistakes in math. Because of carelessness, I failed the exam.When I was depressed,it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that mistakes could also teach us a lesson.【高分句型二】What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely.Finally,my math grades improved.(我的经历)
      Taking my experience into conclusion,everyone can conquer the unavoidable mistakes in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves.Treasure the mistakes,and you will win the treasure.(吸取的经验)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.

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